Fangala the Flying Feline

I LOVE YOU GUYS! Why are you so darn helpful? Seraph, I'm so glad you're still reading, and your comments are more helpful and insightful then ever. And Ayra, thank ...

Yay! Your writing makes me happy! You're very good with characterization; I can clearly picture everything your characters do. And the last scene was wonderfully spooky. It sort of reminded ...

Hi, Pawprint! I love your writing and I'm always eager to read more. For this story, I agree with Gwen that you repeated words a lot, like in that certain ...

Only one complaint. I think you should use the word "your" instead of "my." Personalizing your poem calls attention to you, not the writing. Other than that, very well done! ...

The two of us slid through the earthy depths of the tunnel while the mother griffin flew silently overhead, pushing off the walls to stay airborne. The ceiling was crusted ...

Whee! Faith is back! Sorry about that super-long intermission, but...um...something happened. Anyway, please read and review, but take into consideration that I wrote this four years ago. I readjusted

Hello, Oh Mighty Reviewer of Death. :) First off, you need to post this in normal font; it's difficult and distracting to read as it is. Secondly, you've gone WAY ...

Whoa. Super cool. Sounds kind of like Moon Children, huh? You and I think alike. I love the idea of the tree.

If I were to avoid the Skeletal Hand, I would need to go to a place where it couldn’t smell me. It makes no sense, but apparently skeletons have incredible ...

Very suspenseful, lots of foreshadowing. The only complaint I have is the very last scene, when Christian falls to his knees and starts crying. That just doesn't work for me. ...

The scene between Christian and Kevin is forced; something about it doesn't work. Maybe it would be more realistic if Christian succumbed to peer pressure instead of getting all preachy ...

What can I say? Good, good, good. Only the part about Krobeth finding Christian and Mary under the bed was WAYYY wordy. Try to cut out unecessary words and add ...

I gulped. Melted unicorn ? That really didn’t sound too pleasant to me. I didn’t want to be melted. Luna laughed at my expression. She ruffled my fur and pointed ...

Haha...pigeons. I like the humor aspect here.

OH MY GOD! Listen, this is incredible. When I started reading this, I thought it was just some dumb teenage drama. But this last chapter got my heart racing. I ...